Spirit Sisters
A downloadable Visual Novel for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android
The Egyptian Gods have returned.
In a world reborn under the influence of ancient deities, the Egyptian Orthodox Church emerges, a devout order striving to honor and sustain this divine resurgence.
Wendy, a blue-haired Demigoddess is selected to act as the Vanguard for the Church.
Alongside her stands a silver-haired sister of faith, named Hibiki.
Together, this unlikely duo faces a sinister cult bent on summoning 7 sinister demons. As battles rage and shadows close in, a bond deeper than faith begins to grow—a love forged in the crucible of danger and destined to challenge the fabric of their beliefs.
Will Wendy and Hibiki’s resolve be enough to stem the tide of darkness? And can their newfound connection withstand the weight of their divine mission?
This is their story, Spirit Sisters!
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Development log
- Spirit Sisters: Full Release!15 days ago
- Spirit Sisters: Releases Next Week!20 days ago
- Spirit Sisters: Scripting complete!42 days ago
- All CGs/Scenes Complete!53 days ago
- MUSIC PARTNER!79 days ago
- H-scenes94 days ago
- Spirit Sisters Update!Sep 04, 2024
- Spirit Sisters: First DevlogJul 13, 2024
Comments
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Just only finished Chapter 3, but it's so good! I love how dynamic it is, how atmosphere, epic scenes and silly jokes are intertwined. The art, writing and music are all great. Really glad i picked this one!
Also btw, your mac and pc uploads are swapped :D
Thank you so much! I'll be glad to hear your thoughts on the rest! And oh shit! I'll fix those up quick!
Thank you for making this beautiful VN! Holy fuck, with like a few hundred CGs, vocal tracks (are songs made for the game too, btw?), it's like watching an anime, but better (i am more into VNs :D), it must be a labor of love!
I am now regretting i grabbed it just at min price, but i'll do my best to spread a word! Btw, my suggestion: make a Demo please! It will make more people try the game.
Spotted a few minor mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious:
- "phoenix part i can't believe" (should be "can"?)
- "and you're... a pervert." (says Hibiki instead of Wendy)
- "What the hell do you two think" (same)
- "The plane crash, her arrival at the temple" (what plane crash? :D)
- "Oh, I don;t think so"
- styled font doesn't have some glyphs (like, Māui displayed as M▯ui for me)
I like occasional use of Japanese words, it is cute
I'm just a little sad that they never said "I love you" at the end in this part, that keeps my heart from feeling full, but other than that it was perfect! :D
Thank you for leaving such a kind Review!
I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed the story! This was my passion project, and I put a whole lot of work into getting it done.
I do think I went a little overboard with all the Cgs though. Yes, I partnered with someone to make all those original tracks, Im glad you enjoyed them!
I would love if you could spread the word too! Ive been working on promoting but find the process pretty difficult, Im also working on getting this on Steam!
And an "I love you" is coming. I'm saving it for the next part, so hopefully, all the kissing scenes kept you situated. Please follow my Instagram for updates on my future projects!
And also, Thank you so much for all those errors! I'll fix those up and get updated builds out as soon as possible, alongside a demo version!
Is that index??
No her names Hibiki!
Did you draw everything in this project ? They are actually good. The thumbnail really catch my attention (my first anime is a yuri anime name "Yami to Bōshi to Hon no Tabibito" with the same cover style)
Normally i don't suggest much about any game, because every author has some talent themselves (of course including you). But i see your real effort in making this project (and yuri is my favorite), so I did a quick run and have a few suggestions.
1. The story telling style:
- Please don't use too much narrative paragraph on the whole screen, they make readers hard to focus on the scenes and low down the mood/vibe.
- Maybe you should you some black screens and some "pause" between scenes to make the story alive.
- Don't use too long sentences, and you don't need to tell everything. Just like making films or MV, readers have their own imaginations, they can pick a line, a scene, a picture/image and can feel the story in with their own view. (And some mysteries always add more feeling and curiosity)
2. The music/ambient/effect:
- This can be really hard because music is another thing, i saw a lot of authors with good story but not so good at adding music to their story, which lead to ruin the whole project. Maybe you should find someone who good at this field to collab. Trust me, with the right background music/ambient/effect, the project will be risen to another level.
- You can try to making music yourself, there're a lot of ai music generator (personally i recommend suno)
3. Scenes transition & camera:
- While your drawing really good, but the scenes transition need to be improved. You can learn them by do some research in movie making field and photo shooting experience (or some popular AVN on this site). The transitions and camera angle should be align with the scene vibe/mood, which mean they can be really fast or slowly or instant black out or changing non-stop, depend on the scenes.
4. The potential:
- This project really has huge potential and catching story. With your talent in drawing and the effort in making this, i know you can make a stunning VN.
God speed.
Thanks for the comment, To answer your question I drew everything minus the backgrounds, those are Ai.
Thanks for checking out the demo, I did work hard on it and am grateful for the feedback.
Im glad to know the Yuri spect drew you in, I've loved Yuri for so long and am so happy to finally get this story out there.
To cover your first concerns, I am trying to cut back during my proofreads in terms of pacing and narration. It's a bit hard to know what I should explain or leave out in the open.
My first approach was to write it as a web novel before converting it to the visual novel medium but I've found it to be a bit difficult.
I'll also add better transitions!
MUSIC is so important to me!
I agree it is a major aspect of creating a compelling narrative, I often watch movies/TV shows if I know it'll have a great soundtrack.
In terms of it, I do want to reach out and collaborate with someone on that front, but I am not to sure on where to start.
Right now I'm finishing the rest of the drawings, but soon I'll be working on adding music sfx, etc, thanks again for the feedback and I hope you'll enjoy the full release!
Do you use Discord ? DM me via duylouis221